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dreamer_easy) wrote2022-03-04 11:21 am
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Ack pbbhhht
It is ghastly revisiting a story you wrote two years ago, and the structure's OK, but rereading it line by line you can see how it garnered all those rejections. Things aren't explained properly (well, I knew what was happening!), etc, and also the curse of the nice, passive Orman protagonist. Fie and bollocks.