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[dreamer_easy]

Discovered in one of the notebooks I carry around everywhere, a jetlagged haiku:

Countless wet matches
LA's flags, its windmill farms
Palm trees in the rain

Comments

[dark-pheonix.livejournal.com]

Like most Haikus, I find that incredibly amusing. No offence.

[kateorman.livejournal.com]

None taken! Haikus do sometimes have a "punchline" in the reveal in the last line, and that one does. I'm just surprised at my ability to count to 17 after a trans-Pacific flight.

[barrington.livejournal.com]

Very nice, though that last line seems to be a variation on the universal generic haiku last line: "Petals in the wind."

[kateorman.livejournal.com]

My authenticity is wholly accidental.