dreamer_easy: (tourist)
dreamer_easy ([personal profile] dreamer_easy) wrote2004-10-17 09:27 am

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Discovered in one of the notebooks I carry around everywhere, a jetlagged haiku:

Countless wet matches
LA's flags, its windmill farms
Palm trees in the rain

[identity profile] barrington.livejournal.com 2004-10-17 01:01 am (UTC)(link)
Very nice, though that last line seems to be a variation on the universal generic haiku last line: "Petals in the wind."

[identity profile] kateorman.livejournal.com 2004-10-17 03:53 pm (UTC)(link)
My authenticity is wholly accidental.