Torchwood trailer

( Vague SPOILER )

Fight-Flight

( Panic attacks, scary plane incidents, dubious female supremacy )

Again. Less stupid.

Have now retooled chapter three, replacing that ridiculous exposition scene. The chapter stands at about 3500 words. Needs about one and a half more scenes and some bits filled in.

When we get back from OS, I'm going to skip ch 4 and write ch 6 as a sample. The other major job is to rewrite the outline in something resembling English.