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Feb. 6th, 2009
Again. Less stupid.
Feb. 6th, 2009 11:18 pmHave now retooled chapter three, replacing that ridiculous exposition scene. The chapter stands at about 3500 words. Needs about one and a half more scenes and some bits filled in.
When we get back from OS, I'm going to skip ch 4 and write ch 6 as a sample. The other major job is to rewrite the outline in something resembling English.
When we get back from OS, I'm going to skip ch 4 and write ch 6 as a sample. The other major job is to rewrite the outline in something resembling English.
