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dreamer_easyThe third sample chapter is now 4200 words long, with a satisfactory ending (the sun blows up - I love a good punchline). It should be 5000 words, but no problem, I have some blah blah about one of the character's teenage delinquency to put in.
The second sample chapter, aka Planet of Coffee, is stuffed up in the middle, with a really bad scene of postcard buying and some foreshadowing which doesn't go anywhere. I have to fix that.
The synopsis is too short and has a couple of gapers in it.
That's my to-do list...
ETA: For bonus points, work out how to correctly punctuate "one of the character's teenage delinquency", 'cos I'm sure not going to.
The second sample chapter, aka Planet of Coffee, is stuffed up in the middle, with a really bad scene of postcard buying and some foreshadowing which doesn't go anywhere. I have to fix that.
The synopsis is too short and has a couple of gapers in it.
That's my to-do list...
ETA: For bonus points, work out how to correctly punctuate "one of the character's teenage delinquency", 'cos I'm sure not going to.
