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Just rewatched this episode, with the commentary. Despite the embarrassment of the chainmail bikini, it's still a ripper - fast-paced, strongly motivated, passionate, acted with conviction by all, and full of the characters getting the crap kicked out of them. V. interesting from a writerly technical point of view to hear Mr Chibnall pointing out glitches in the writing, both in the commentary and in his recent interview - notably Ianto's line about watching Jack suffer and die, which was never paid off. The commentary is hilarious, with references to the "escalating insanity" of the story, GDL's dip in the filthy Hub water, and the missing coleslaw. :-)

Date: 2007-12-02 05:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jblum.livejournal.com
...I just want it noted that there is some dissent on the "strongly motivated" and "acted with conviction" front. :-)

It's the ending which most annoys me on the motivation front. Why do they forgive Ianto for all this, why does Ianto decide to keep working for the boss who just pulled a gun on him and the bastards who just killed his girlfriend, and most basically, WHY IS HIDING YOUR KILLER ROBOT GIRLFRIEND IN THE BASEMENT NOT A SACKABLE OFFENCE? What exactly is Torchwood's Human Resources policy when it comes to dismissing employees, if that doesn't seem to qualify?

Even if they've consciously decided to forgive Ianto, and he's decided to stay on rather than getting as far away as possible from the whole Torchwood thing, why is there not a big scene where they actually communicate how they get to that point to the viewer? Even Chibnall thinks they blew that one, it seems...

This episode's heart is in the right place, it's doing a lot of the right sort of things, but I can't get past the big points which are just not there...

Date: 2007-12-02 01:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] vindaloo-vixen.livejournal.com
Actually, I have to admit that that whole thing wasn't something I liked either. I know Ianto cries that he should be able to keep his killer cyborg around because he 'cleans up their shit', but isn't that his job? It might not be much fun, but doesn't strike me as earning cyborg-that-could-mess-up-the-world points.

Date: 2007-12-02 01:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kateorman.livejournal.com
You misremember the scene in question...

Date: 2007-12-02 01:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] endis-ni.livejournal.com
You're unlikely to get sacked when the boss fancies you something rotten. You'd probably need it to be Daleks before being obliged to polish your CV.

What I want to know is, how did we get from "I want to watch you suffer and die" to stopwatch innuendo?

Date: 2007-12-02 11:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kateorman.livejournal.com
Do you remember when there were theories around that Ianto was seducing Jack as part of his terrible revenge thingy? he he he

Date: 2007-12-03 02:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] irritant01.livejournal.com
Testify brother!

I've now tried four times to write a sentence to sum up how bad I thought this episode was... I just can't muster the adjectives :P

Date: 2007-12-03 12:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jblum.livejournal.com
To be fair, the story does have a lot to recommend it -- the direction is sharp and pacey, visually it looks really good, and the character motivations and ideas make sense up to that point. It's not an unredeemed disaster, it's just... a weird mixture of too obvious and inexplicable.

Date: 2007-12-03 06:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] megthelegend.livejournal.com
And how the hell does Ianto get to the point where he has so forgiven Jack that he actually seems to be having a sexual relationship with him?! Ianto's a blokey bloke at *times* - he gets physical, gets angry - but mostly he's a dapper, fairly intelligent, helpful, reserved *butler*. He's not the type to be overwhelmed by lust, and the emotional side of it just does not make sense.

Date: 2007-12-03 06:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kateorman.livejournal.com
And how the hell does Ianto get to the point where he has so forgiven Jack that he actually seems to be having a sexual relationship with him?!

There must have been a secret off-screen shag before the final scene (as broadcast), since Jack has obviously also forgiven Ianto!

Date: 2007-12-03 07:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] megthelegend.livejournal.com
And Owen! And Owen's forgiven dead Jack as well! Bizarre writing!!!!!

We're meant to believe that there's this great love/strength/bond/something underpinning all their relationships, with a lot of hero worship towards Jack as well, which outweighs all the horrible things they do to each other - but it's just not visible most of the time. Like Gwen's amazing wonderfulness. (I'll try not to get started about that - I actually like her, but she's not St Gwen.)

One of the things I liked about the whole Cyberwoman thing was that you could sympathise with Ianto's point of view (twisted and unrealistic though it was) and you could see Jack's point of view as well. That was one time in Torchwood where I could actually sympathise with both parties in a dispute. Then they screwed it all up by having it be basically forgotten!

(I love Torchwood and get a lot of enjoyment out of it, but part of the enjoyment is finding all these odd writing flaws!)

Date: 2007-12-03 03:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lordalius.livejournal.com
Okay, a thought I've just had: maybe you *can't* just quit or get fired from Torchwood. I mean, they've got a vault where they keep, among other things, dead previous employees. After having seen all that technology and all those aliens, it's just not something that Torchwood would let you walk away from. (They don't exactly want irate former employees deciding they're going to spill their guts on the news, right?)

So, Jack forgives people for doing idiotic things all the time because he knows that he can't just fire them. Ianto agrees to stay on because he knows the alternative could be ending up either locked up or "stored" in the Torchwood vault, like Susie. Whether they like it or not, THEY'RE ALL STUCK WITH EACH OTHER. So they do the best they can to get on, and try to forgive their co-workers when they pull absolutely ridiculous stunts, because the alternative is far worse.

Maybe?

Date: 2007-12-04 12:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jblum.livejournal.com
Except that Jack says he's going to fire and retcon Owen in "End of Days", just because Owen talks back one time too many...

Date: 2007-12-02 12:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] vindaloo-vixen.livejournal.com
I actually quite like it too. The first time I watched I actually found Lisa's story quite horrific. I guess I was kind of going from the words and concepts and not being put off by the visuals, which I realise for Lisa were clunky (metal heels got me more than metal bikini - maybe the Cyberman who converted her had a glitch and didn't know they weren't part of her feet, so he armoured over them?) the second time.

The frustrating thing was that with the visiting scientist and pizza-deliverer, they showed they could do some brilliantly grotesque effects, so why not apply some of them to Lisa?

(And does Ianto shave Lisa's legs? I guess he might well as he cares for her in her metal chair, but it must be dead fiddly getting underneath all those bits of metal that weren't quite touching her. Maybe they have super-duper alien depilatories at the Hub.)

I was actually really freaked out, both times I watched, by the pizza-deliverer's fate. Apart from finding body horror quite chilling to start with, it's just creepy that this poor woman only stopped in to deliver pizza, and Lisa not only killed her but started walking around in her corpse. Brrr.

Date: 2007-12-02 01:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kateorman.livejournal.com
does Ianto shave Lisa's legs

AHA HA HAH HA HA HA

I suppose the poor pizza girl's brain is lying around in the lab somewhere, discarded. EUW

Date: 2007-12-03 03:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] the-cockfighter.livejournal.com
Did we actually see a brain? 'cause you know, I've met a couple of pizza delivery guys before...

Date: 2007-12-03 06:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kateorman.livejournal.com
THE PERFECT SOLUTION

Date: 2007-12-03 06:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nostalgia-lj.livejournal.com
The lack of payoff for Ianto's threat to Jack annoyed me. I spent all season waiting for that, dammit!

Date: 2007-12-03 06:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nostalgia-lj.livejournal.com
I learned a Valuable Lesson About Writing -- don't have characters threaten to kill each other if you're only going to make them lovers by the end with no explanation of how that happened and when.

Date: 2007-12-03 06:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nostalgia-lj.livejournal.com
You wants me to read many words? *flailarms*

Date: 2007-12-03 06:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kateorman.livejournal.com
No - I just thought it might be interesting! It was kind of groovy, in both the commentary and the interview, to see the writer pointing out some of the same bloopers we-all spotted. This may bode well for the 2008 season.

Date: 2007-12-03 06:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nostalgia-lj.livejournal.com
Yah, I has heard positive things about them having learned from S1. (Which I do hope means they didn't listen to fandom more than we deserve which is about none.) I hope they tell us this year when Jack and Ianto started Doing It, and that Gwen does more comedy faces.

Date: 2007-12-03 09:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kateorman.livejournal.com
If we're really lucky, that'll all be the same scene.

Date: 2007-12-03 01:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nostalgia-lj.livejournal.com
*imagines Eve Myles doing comedy reaction to Jack/Ianto*

*squees quietly*

Date: 2007-12-04 12:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ageless-aislynn.livejournal.com
*imagines Eve Myles doing comedy reaction to Jack/Ianto*

That just made me *sporfle* (literally, I nearly choked on my coffee! ;) ) Lol! I can just see her peek around the doorway then make Very Big Eyes... Then possibly start taking notes or grabbing a convenient camera or whatever... ;)

Date: 2007-12-03 06:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nostalgia-lj.livejournal.com
Does it say when Jack and Ianto started Doing It?

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